Fjord83's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[new york stronghold]

Proof read!

First, you should always go back over your work before submission and look for typos, and keep a dictionary handy. The plot line was just awful, why would a terrorist organization not strike New York first? Finally you need to actually end your program instead of looping it.

[Animation Castration]

Decent

The sound quality is pretty poor. Animation skills are decent for a novice. No plot, old overused dull jokes. Also I believe you're supposed to give credit to the artists of the songs you used. Not 100% on that though, but even if you don't have to, you really should.

Werdna7 responds:

Well, it was the first time i've ever edited the music, i used Adobe Soundbooth..and i have no idea how to use that program, so i didn't really know what i could do. i only had 4, 90 minute class periods to make this. so i couldn't really come up with much on the spot. and the bands, yes, i forgot to mention them, the next movie i make, if i do, will definitely have credidations for audio. Thanks for you comment.

[Wolfenstein: ET Moments]

NOOOOOOOOOOOBBBS!!!

I love it! Great work! Anyone who's played online frist person shooters will love this. :) 5/10

[Mr.Blue Sky Soda]

Nice!

Good job on the flash, nice to see some people still appreciate the classics :D Could've been longer, maybe having a scene of each season with the girl holding that particular seasons soda. Good job though. :D 4/8

[New Super Mario Blooper 2]

Old

Sorry, but the Mario flashes are getting old, the only time I even got a chuckle on that was when Kirby was eating the vine, I thought it was just going to keep going on forever, then when he spit it back out at Luigi it lost it's humor with me. Sorry, but maybe you should try something a little more origional.

[Born to kill-mike project]

Weird

Not the worst thing I've ever seen. Pretty good for your 1st time too. maybe next time add a plot, better sound effects. Keep at it. :)

[The Allien part 1]

Great job.

Really good job for a 1st time submission. Probably would have used a different song other than "It's My Life" but I didn't make it. :D Also I'd use it more as bg music and add sound (effects). Finally (I'm chalking this up to a translation error) but it's spelt "Alien" unless you intentionally put 2 l's in like that's his name or something.

Bax3r responds:

1. Idk where to get Sounds xD
2. no i Just cant spell good im from bulgeria :>
ohh and im 12 years old :D

[Black & Reds - The Walk]

BAD

This is definatelly NOT suitable for all ages. You need to change the rating.

[Fallen Angel Ep. 1 (Pt3)]

WOW!

This series has great potential. I can't wait for ep.2. BTW rememberdizz, I did notice that. I hope that they will explain it too.

[WoodMan Is Incredible]

Hilarious

That was awesome. Very funny. "Woosh"